Tuesday 22 April 2014

Revisiting Final page/image

Final layout chosen (above)




The series of three cinematic views were too similar and I just felt that across the double spread needed more.

So I have edited one of my earlier drawings to suit the ending. This i believe is coincidentally much better as the image of the pair walking across a field was draw at the same time as the earlier image (yellow colour pallet). I have edited the farther out of the drawing and just left the son. SO, now the earlier spread in the narrative shows the father and son walking across a field that is similar BUT NOT THE SAME as the final image which shows just one person.
Linking the narrative symbolically/visually back - and emphasizing the idea of loneliness without the father at the same time...

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