Tuesday 25 February 2014

Road


Pilons

Responding to the critique feedback, I have began putting watercolor into the drawings - playing with mix mediums - seeing If i can get the same effects in different ways

Monday 24 February 2014

Arial and campfire



Critique feedback - 24th

Feedback based around images from previous post (didn't touch on Narrative of Old Lady)

Marcus suggested leaving more mystery to the man and his child, asking why we needed to see their faces at all. Earlier in the blog I posted drawings of the pair walking a field - these were noted as carrying that mysteriousness that some of the other panels lacked.

Joel noted that the textures in the fathers beard and hat/hair are beginning to resemble that of the landscapes. This could be something to peruse further; the father has been on the road so long he resembles the baron, dry landscape he wonders... the child could show more signs of this as the narrative progresses ?

The gestural marks and overall aesthetic were agreed upon as more effective than the previous, more polished, drawings that don't carry the atmosphere of the narrative as effectively. It was also noted, as is my intention for the next step in image experimentation, that mixing medium could benefit the images- - or trying to create the same aesthetic with different media.

Through this unit I have been working in ways that are not my usual means of image production (having worked extensively in print in the last year) Working in pencil colour has allowed this looser influence in my work - I have done some experimentation in watercolour which I feel now needs to be combined with some of the pencil colour. Aiming to maintain the textural marks of the waxy colour pencils with the softer watercolour.


Sunday 23 February 2014

Crit 24th Feb - panel tests




Wordless NArrative Research - Shaun Tan


Website:
http://www.shauntan.net/books.html
"In ‘The Arrival’, the absence of any written description also plants the reader more firmly in the shoes of an immigrant character. There is no guidance as to how the images might be interpreted, and we must ourselves search for meaning and seek familiarity in a world where such things are either scarce or concealed"


Wednesday 19 February 2014

More sketches of the old lady's home




Working from earlier drawings/storyboards

I think I might be heading in the right direction - I have achieved a little more accuracy than the initial story boarding whilst (hopefully) a bit more playfulness in the mark-making ...

Brian Selznick - Illustrator Author - The Invention of Hugo Cabret

and from Selznick's website - the opening sequence in drawings http://www.theinventionofhugocabret.com/slideshow_flash.htm

Incredible pencil Illustration and storytelling.

VAROOM! Jane Stanton on Charles Shearer's "Haunting" Landscapes - RESEARCH

On P.58 of Varoom! (Issue 24 Winter 2014) Jane Stanton

"magicall, haunting landscape prints, disturbed by the wind, around the rocks of red sandstone."

http://www.varoom-mag.com/?p=6553

Aesthetically these drawings fit thematically with my post apocalyptic narrative - the limited colour pallet is effective for conveying a dramatic, bleak scene.

William Kentridge Drawings - Landscape inspirartion


Monday 17 February 2014

CM narrative development

Further drawing, experimenting with marks and colour pallet. Inspired by visits to Sand Dunes and Grasslands.